Friday, December 11, 2009

Is Steve cruel or cool?


Monster,

Is Steve cruel or cool?
If he was cool he'd be in school. Steve
did achieve. Believe beloved Steve.
He Hurt Him. Steve Sacrificed safety.
Jail could indeed kill.
Damnably dead dreams.
Jump suits, junk suggestive escapes.
Pumpkin orange, poorly orated.
Steve's life is on the line.
Hopeless happiness!

1 comment:

  1. Wow, Dakota. This is pretty amazing. Doesn't quite follow the format, but I'm pleased with your alliteration. Nice work.

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